Thank you for your first comments last week. It was a good start, and I'm sure you'll keeping working harder each week to do the very best that you can.
This week, I'd like to you tell us all as much about the main character in your story as you can.
- Describe them - appearance, personality, likes/dislikes, etc.
- Share with us as much as you have learnt about the character (so far) from your book.
See you in Readers Circle
Mr. B
the main characters were the old mouse, the guards and the robbers.
ReplyDeletethe old mouse was wearing a long rag shabby skin rick(has lots of cheese)
hates the robbers. the guards are strong wear glasses and a suit .
we have read the full books its about a rich mouse who day gets robbed he calls some guards and at the end they find the robbers
So far in our book old bun and the burglar the only characters we have met is old bun. Old bun is a rich mouse that lives in a big house alone in Mouseville on a street called squeak street. He loves looking a his cheese and smelling its rich perfume.
ReplyDeleteby taylah
the book is called Old Bun and the Burglar characters are:
ReplyDeleteOld Bun,is a friendly old mouse who has piles of golden cheese that he shares with all of squeak street his parties were famous.
The Three Burglars, are mean and strong they were stealing things from rich mice.
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ReplyDeletethe main characters were the old mouse, the guards (who were the robbers. the guards wear glasses and really cool suits. the old mouse wore a long, scabby rags.
ReplyDeleteThe main characters in the story old bun and the burglars old bun and the three burglars. Old bun a an old rich mice who lives all alone with his nice gloden cheese.
ReplyDeleteThe three burglars are big mean old burglars who like to steal gloden cheese from the old rich mice who live alone.